Then on the criticism of the OAU Students Union release by anonymous; grammar:
SU propaganda: ONE ARTICLE, FIFTY-FIVE ERRORS
With due respect Messrs Omotayo Akande, Emmanuel Ojedokun (Kant) and Seun Oketooto, kindly see some of the errors in your recently released article titled, ‘On the assault on the PRO of our union’
*The student union (Line 1)
•The Students’ Union
*…being a collective umbrella body (L1)
•a collective body or umbrella body
*…of all students is a constituted body with (it) mandate and machinery (L2)
*…largely (within) the students populace. (L3)
*… in accordance (to) – (L6)
•in accordance with
the tenet (L6)
…Great Ife (students union) – (L7)
•Great Ife Students’ Union
*…(Proponent) of any form of oppression are not only (Line 11)
*…official responsibility of the Public (Relation) Officer of the (students’) Union (L13)
•Relations •the Students’ Union
*…Mr. Emmanuel Ojedokun (Immanuel Kant) on (the) Nov 17 – (L14)
•…on November 17
*…went round classes to (sought) permission (L15)
*(to make announcement) (to keep students’ abreast of development) within the (union) – (L15- 16)
• (to make announcement) or (to keep students abreast of development)
*the programs lined up for the International (Students day).
*In 0DLT 1, Professor Y.K Yusuf, former (dean) of (the) (faculty) of (Art) …
• Dean of Faculty of Arts
*…PRO of the (union) to exercise his constitutional duty.
• the Union
*(Although) (It) must be established that the permission
*of the PRO to make such announcement during a (lecture section)
• lecture or session
*TOTALLY AT THE DISCRETION AND MAGNANIMITY OF (THIS UNIVERSITY) DON
*AND THE DECLINE OF SUCH REQUEST BY THE PROFESSOR, (WE ALSO) EXPECTED TO BE POLITE, AND COURTEOUS
as some other lecturers have done which never caused a rancor
*as the PRO (will) gracefully step aside to allow the lecture to finish their lecture.
To the greatest amusement of the (student body present)
•Students’ body executive/officials
*He went further to express unwarranted anger (of) physically assaulting the PRO
*This of course (generate) uproar
*outrage by (the professor)
*… but (speak) negative of the supposed symbiotic
*relationships expected between students and (lecturer).
*the immediate absence of the professor
*…just to avoid the professor being mobbed by aggrieved students
*The PRO is yet to be invited for any meeting for the purpose of clarification when necessary.
•Remove ‘when necessary’
*We (are) very impressed with the doggedness of the conscious members of students in the (department) of English who understand that union intervention on the assault on the PRO (will) also be equally replicated if it were to be any other student.
•were •Department • would
*The understanding that the PRO is on a union assignment and any assault is (automatic) an assault on the (students) body.
*We will not fail to express our disappointment at the unpatriotic act of (the president) of the (English department).
•the President • Department of English
*We wish to inform him that the union (will) have (likewise) intervene if he was in anyways assaulted by any lecturer.
•would • delete either ‘likewise’ or ‘have’
*The (students’ union) stand to defend the interest of her members and if a union executive is assaulted then what becomes the (faith) of any other Great Ife student.
•Students’ Union •fate
*We are aware of the Congress of (English students) but will advise (their) President to give members the true side of the story for () objective resolution.
•students of English Language •the •an objective
* We must also understand that our (similarity) as students is of course more important than the differences or barriers of department.
•vague, not contextual in meaning
*Our attention has (being) drawn by the ACJ of indiscriminate posters pasted around department and faculties.
*The (students union) sincerely is oblivion of this development as the posters (of) (the union) were pasted by student agencies who get such contract…
•Students’ Union •on • the Union
*This is in no way connected to the (incidence) that occurred at the (English department) as wrongly speculated.
•incident •Department of English
++ALL THANKS TO NASELS FOR ITS TUTORIAL CLASSES. SU PRES, SEC-GEN AND PRO YOU MAY ALSO CONSIDER ATTENDING? I do not expect you to be perfect but a release from the Union.